Jeffery E. Frieden Make Them Process It, Revision, Writing, Writing Conversations

I Teach Revision on Day 2

When I was setting up my classroom for the 2018-2019 school year, I tweeted a picture of the only decoration I had up at the moment (see the featured image above). Moments later, Melissa-Ann Pero (@bshsmspero) thanks me for posting it, and says she’s going to make herself one.

A bit later on, she tweeted her creation, giving credit to Kelly Gallagher (@KellyGToGo) for RADaR and mentioning me in the process. And in my small Twitter world, the tweet caught fire. At the time of this writing, the post has been liked 305 times and retweeted 118 times!

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3 Reasons to Get the FREE Preview of My Book, Right Now

I couldn’t wait. Make Them Process It isn’t done yet. I still have to send it to an editor, but I just couldn’t hold back any longer. I want you to see what’s in there. There is some really good, practical stuff I want to get into your hands before the full release of the book. Consider it a back to school gift!

All summer long I have been putting my energy into writing a book that solves many challenges inevitably come with writing instruction:

  • Getting students to generate their own writing topics
  • Teaching grammar using a method that really sticks
  • Taking students beyond surface-level revision
  • Assessing multiple student drafts lightning quick
  • Developing a mature voice in young writers and
  • Celebrating the quality work students are completing in your classroom

I know many teachers who are looking for ways to streamline their writing instruction into a unified whole. They want to take all those discrete skills and put them all together in one place. I’m not going to say that Make Them Process It is the final answer, but it is at least several steps in that direction.

Here are 3 reasons why you should download this free preview, right now.

1. It is flexible and accommodating. Make Them Process It is not curriculum or a list of assignments. Instead, it is a how-to guide for getting maximum power out of a student composition book. Rather than disrupt your carefully planned instruction, I want to use this book as a way to come alongside you and offer support ongoing.

As you are thinking through how to deliver highly effective writing lessons, Make Them Process It can help you consider your academic year as whole, get your students to generate a lot more writing, teach your students how to revise their work at a deeper level, and help them integrate those grammar and craft lessons into their writing.

Please, keep doing what you’re doing. I don’t want you to change your lesson plans. But let Make Them Process It help you figure out how to organize everything that’s good about your teaching to uncover value in ways you have yet to consider.

2. You get ongoing support. I don’t like the idea of creating a product, convincing people to buy it, thanking the customers for their purchase, and then walking away. That doesn’t sit well with me.

Instead, I want to hear from you. I want to help you figure out how to make the teaching of writing effective and engaging for you and your students. I don’t want you to buy my book and then disappear into your classroom. I want to hear about your struggles and offer help where I can.

In 2007, I first heard about the Writer’s Notebook in a keynote address from Kelly Gallagher. I was convinced! I got started with the notebook right away, but shortly after launch, it fell out of use. I did this a few more times, eventually walking away. It took another keynote address from Kelly Gallagher several years later, with him still holding up that notebook, for me to give it another try. But this time, I was determined–I was going to get students to fill up that notebook!

And I did it too. I got through that year; it was hard. I wanted to quit more than once. I got confused, discouraged, and stuck. Several times I wanted to cry out for help, but I didn’t know who, if anyone, was listening. So, I soldiered on, made it through, and it turned out to be a rewarding experience. But if I had support at the time I needed it, I am convinced I could have taken all my efforts even further.

That’s what I want to give you. Even if you’re a pro writing teacher, I am convinced I have new value to offer you in Make Them Process It. And if your taking the plunge for the first time and need to call out for help at key moments, you should have someone there to walk with you. I’m here.

3. It won’t be free for long. In a few short weeks, the full version of Make Them Process It will be ready for release and this offer might be off the table. I don’t want you to miss out.

Pick up your free preview of the book after taking a brief survey. This is the only thing I am going ask from you in taking me up on this offer: five minutes of your time. When you click “submit” at the end of the survey, you will get access to the preview copy of the book. Take the survey and claim your free preview copy of Make Them Master It, right now!

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Jeffery E. Frieden Revision, Writer's Notebook, Writing Conversations

Getting Students Beyond Superficial Revision

You’re about to get into today’s lesson: revising a first draft. Before you say the words, you can feel the collective groan gathering strength. When you finally come out with it, they are ready to revolt: “Today we’re going to revise your writing assignment!” And there it is.

They complain. They grunt violently. They look for pitchforks and other pointy objects to take up against you. And one student in the corner quietly Snapchats a selfie of an ice bag on her head. It’s clear. They don’t want to do this.

As I see it, a big problem is students think they are done with their writing. In the eyes of each student writer, what they put on paper looks “good enough.” They are done. If they understand it, then there’s nothing to revise. But even when I get them to see that their writing needs further work, all I get from them are superficial changes. They may change a punctuation mark or two and a grammar mistake, but they almost never revise for content and purpose.

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